White Monday. If this day was a person, it would be the bastard child of Hitler and Stalin that was pure evil. No one likes Monday, and this is a long, long, long day. Did I mention it was long?
Once saving grace about today is that my first period blended class doesn't meet physically, but I did have students come in for help on things. My other English 12 classes finished discussing the last part of
Slaughter-House Five, and I believe a some through a party that it was over. Sad, because this is such a great book. I think the ones who actually read most of it really did enjoy it. The ones who didn't or slacked off were a little lost.
In creative writing, we continued our descriptive writing theme. I had them do the writing below, and I critiqued their description. If it wasn't descriptive enough, I asked them questions that spurred them on to add more detail. Some loved this, others struggled to add enough detail for the reader so see, hear, and feel it. They are getting better, which is encouraging and exciting.
Write down a bumper sticker you like.
Describe the car (van, truck, SUV) this bumper sticker is stuck on- make, model, color, condition.
Open the door and describe the smells and textures.
Name and describe three objects you find inside the car.
Name and describe a fourth object you are surprised to find in there.
You look up, and the owner is coming. Who is he/she? How is he/she walking? What are they wearing? Are they carrying anything? What facial expression are they wearing? (Describe all of these in vivid, rich detail.)
The owners says something. What does he/she say?